This is the first draft of my music magazine which is very dull and boring. It does not look very interesting and magazine like. I have added various changes and improvements which now make my magazine very conventional and excellent. it has a plain set up with only two images, which is not very conventional.
This is the first draft of my contents page. it does not include many conventions such as the writers note and looks plain. I have added many images, and made it look more suitable for a goos contents page. These are the changes and improvements that have made my contents page better in many ways including the structure and attractiveness. it contains only one image and not many contents features so is dull.
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